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    let’s write a song for J. Ok, it may not work.

    There’s a trace amount of you where my cookie crumbles
    See a plate by the palate where some thoughts might tumble
    hold the light like a flicker while the emotions are churning
    light a guidepost to the place where my heart might stop burning

    This thoughtful line came to me while watching National lampoon Loaded Weapon 1. That was so deep. I meditated on the movie for some time. Hit D Minor for Miss Demeanor.

    There’s some verse, anything you’d like to scream to J during the chorus or bridge?

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